北京环球教育分享10月雅思写作高分范文

　　原标题：北京环球教育分享10月雅思写作高分范文

 

　　曾几何时，环球颜王团杨亮老师还夸赞过考官们，在这个寒秋悄至冷风频袭的时刻，考官们用了一个极其简单的老题来迎接十一长假之后的首场考试。不曾想，好景不长。本周四的考试，很多烤鸭在写作考场中的感受肯定是应了时下最流行的一句话“蓝瘦，香菇”。

 

　　我本将心向明月，结果你和我玩阴的。考试当天下午，对于本次写作考题的吐槽也是在悲凉的氛围中欢快地刷屏了。

 

　　原题如下：

 

　　Some scientists believe that intelligent life forms may exist on other planets and some want to send message to contact them.Others think it is a bad idea because these life forms may be too dangerous.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.20161013

 

　　分析：

 

　　审题之后，请大家相信自己的眼睛，这的确是一个和太空技术相关的题目。题目讨论的关键也的确是人类是否应该和可能存在的外星人联系。

 

　　笔者觉得十一假期期间，负责出题的考官肯定是看了很多科幻电影，如《ET》，《MIB》，《Mars Attacks》和《Independence Day》等。冷静下来，本题其实难度有限，因为这些电影你也看过。试想一下，如果出题考官看了《釜山行》，烤鸭们就真的可以哭死在厕所了。

 

　　Scientists in some space research institutes have been sending message to some corners of the universe since they were able to do that.Possible consequences of doing so,seemingly,have not been carefully analyzed yet.

 

　　本段的开头算是言简意赅了。其实，众所周知往外太空发信号， 不是一天两天的事情了。咱们国家刚刚建成的那个“大锅盖”可不是为了看电视多收几个频道。因此一个简单的背景介绍之后，就是明确地表达了笔者的观点。对此，笔者表示并不乐观。毕竟笔者是看了很多科幻片的。

 

　　Primarily,building connection with other intelligent species with humans'current technology does require incredibly high cost.This is to say,tremendous fund ought to be utilized for related technology research and establishment of some certain facilities instead of being used for solving some livelihood problems.Even though mankind were setting up connection with aliens who are living in a couple of light years away and are obviously less civilized with less advanced technology,with limited space technology that humans have currently we would be able do nothing further.Investing billions of dollars for saying hi to someone who might not understand at all is definitely not a wise decision.

 

　　坦言之，在写这道题之前，笔者还真心的思考过这么问题。那是午夜梦回，辗转难眠的夜晚。笔者仰望星空，发现，其实也看不到啥，但是这并不影响笔者对于这个关乎全人类未来的命题的思考。以人类目前的有限的太空技术，和外星人建立联系肯定是大费周章的事情。如果被我们联系到的外星人文明程度还不如我们，那将是一个极其尴尬并且非常不经济的局面。

 

　　耗费大量人力物力只为了和外星人打个招呼，并且对方还不一定能懂，这明显不是一个明智的决定。简言之，这段针对题干当中第一部分的人的观点进行论述。只论证，如果外星生物的智能程度不如我们的情况。为下文留下伏笔。

 

　　Worse,unknown creatures that receive humans'greeting are more advanced and intelligent ones than inhabitants of the earth.What will happen at that time is more likely to be what people often see in science fiction movies nowadays."White house is being attacked and Air Force One is shot down by missiles from unidentified flying objects".Intelligent species are not willing to co-exist peacefully or harmoniously with other creatures whose civilization apparently lags way behind.Their greed drives them use wars to make the earth their colony offering whatever they need from this planet.If that happened,humans would extinct and the only survivors would live their life in zoos of aliens.

 

　　承接上文，如果被我们联系到的外星生物在文明程度和科技发展领域都完胜地球上这些愚蠢的人类。那么后果不堪设想，在这里请大家自觉脑补各种科幻片里面的破坏场面。请大家放心，首先被袭击的永远是纽约，美国都快被消灭完了，外星人才会发现，原来地球上还有个亚洲。总之，这段直接回答了题干中另外一部分人的观点，并且肯定了他们的想法。

 

　　As has been mentioned above,possible outcomes of sending message to unknown life in somewhere of the universe are what humans cannot afford or what we cannot accept.Therefore,space telescopes are not what we should spend money on,as paying for risks is never worthy.

 

　　结尾简要地表达笔者观点。与外星人建立联系，不是徒劳无功就是引狼入室，愚蠢的人类对此切记要谨言慎行啊。

 

　　笔者在本文中论述观点难免有不尽人意之处，欢迎大家斧正。