北京环球教育老师为你拆解雅思写作新题

　　人与人之间的关系，其实一直是雅思写作考试中比较常见的考试范围。通常家人之间的关系、同学同事之间的关系还算比较常出现；更有甚者可能会考察年轻人与老年人之间的关系。

 

　　这次考察了邻里之间的关系，也算是有些小众的话题。但是，该题目的提问方式较为简单，是一个标准的双问题报告。北京环球教育（原环球雅思）杨亮老师认为这种文章在行文过程中，基本可以不用考虑结构的问题，最稳妥的四段法也肯定是 选择。

 

　　题目如下：

 

　　City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has lost.Why this happens?And how to solve this?20160924

 

　　两个问题，因此毫不犹豫地选择四段法。分别用一个主段来回应一个问题。由于篇幅限制，通常情况下每个问题的回应会被分为两个分论点进行讨论。这样对论证来说比较规范，尽管如此下文并没有采用这一传统方式。

 

　　Neighbors have not been on the list of persons who people can call to have a chat or party together for a long time,since people began to move to relatively isolated apartment buildings to live in.With majority of people realizing the significance of contact with others living around,it is the high time to step out of their apartments to enjoy the time with their neighbors.

 

　　开头段，实则全是背景的描述。因为本题是报告类的问题，对于点题要求不高。并不比像以往题目当中一定要将本题争论的要点转述出来。

 

　　All reasons that might lead to this situation can be attributed to people's modern lifestyle with excessive stress and hurry.In the morning,most people will rush to where they work or study,and thus they have no time to chat with who come out of the same building with them.Usually,a smile or a nod to others is what people can only do for greeting.Similarly,after a whole day's tiring work,in the evening few people can still be energetic to talk to whoever they meet in their community.The only thing they are willing to do is rushing home.Weekends are so precious for them that majority of them will choose to stay at home to spend time with their family.

 

　　其实，本段只是论证了一个导致这一尴尬事实的原因。随后，通过时间层次来分别论证了这一论点。这并不是一个传统的报告类文章的论证方式。各位可以借鉴。

 

　　Dragging urban residents out of their flats requires a series of methods.In the urban planning stage,residential buildings should not be designed that crowdedly in order to leave adequate open space for public activity areas like places for fitness facilities and gardens.Thereafter,under supervision of local governments,real estate developers ought to be responsible for installing those facilities and building gardens for local residents.After people moving in these buildings,local committees should be in charge of organizing community activities at weekends or on public holidays regularly,inviting who live around to offer them a chance to get relaxation from participating in some group recreational activities with their neighbors in the areas designed by governments and built by developers.

 

　　本段亦是如此，其实就是一个解决方案。只不过从不同阶段开始论证而已。和传统的两个方案的并列结构有所不同。

 

　　Most of people have already realized the importance of getting along well with their neighbors,and however why they still do not know each other is just because they are more likely to spend their limited free time so as to loosen up by themselves.Once opportunities for both getting relaxation and knowing their neighbors are available,without a shadow of doubt people will be fond of them.

 

　　结尾总结了全文的两个主段，中规中矩。

 

　　纵观全文，尽管结构是非常常规的四段法，每一个主段回应一个问题，具体的论证方法可能有别于通常情况下各位读过的例文。但是，此行文逻辑还是值得推敲的。文章本无好坏，结构亦是如此。

 

　　环球教育（原环球雅思）老师通过这样的方式来论证本篇报告类文章，也只是想给各位读者一个不常规的方式。欢迎借鉴，欢迎斧正。